Office Complex (Approach)

Comment by George Ioannidis on June 12, 2013 at 10:51am

Nice start Akin. Some points if I may:

-Try to put some glass into the black rectangular holes (if they are supposed to be windows of course)

-Shadows on the building are coming from the sun to the left side of building. There is also another sun on background picture. Looks confusing and unreal.

-Reflections on the four vertical curtain glass walls are showing strange colours. Try to use some sky with tree line for reflected stuff.

Has nice feel of summer and clear atmosphere though. And of course - interesting concept!

Comment by akinlolu olugboji on June 12, 2013 at 11:12am

There are glasses behind them only too dark, need to work on the reflection.

Need to get another background without a solar disk.

The curtail wall is meant to reflect visible objects, yet to master scaling HDRi maps properly for background reflections.

Thanks for the notes will work harder at improving the next set of rendering coming soon. 

 

Comment by George Ioannidis on June 12, 2013 at 10:04pm

I never use HDRI background when doing external daylight renders. Really couldn't distinguish any improvement to the rendering using both sun and HDRI. IMHO of course.

Comment by akinlolu olugboji on June 12, 2013 at 10:57pm

Put your sun on channel 0 and the HDRI sky on channel 1, with the channel slider you will notice the difference. It helps with indirect lighting without the switch that impacts on performance.

Comment by mike makki on June 13, 2013 at 1:37am

Akinlolu...your camera angle shot is not selling the design...

position your camera eye level and to left so you can get a prospective view.

Comment by akinlolu olugboji on June 13, 2013 at 3:26am

Usually do but the selection team preferred this shot to the perspective one. 

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